Should you include a prologue or skip it? Here's how to make the right choice for your novel.

Prologues are one of the most debated topics in fiction. Some literary agents warn against them, some readers skip them altogether, and yet many of the most beloved bestselling novels begin with one. The real question is this: Does your story need a prologue, or will Chapter One carry the weight on its own?

In this episode, I'm breaking down when a prologue truly adds value, when it works against you, and how to write a prologue that pulls readers in instead of pushing them away. If you've been second-guessing whether your book needs a prologue, this conversation will provide a clear way forward and the confidence to know you're making the right decision for your story.

Here’s what you’ll hear inside the episode:

[02:05] Why most prologues fall flat and the single question that tells you if yours is worth keeping.

[03:30] The five types of prologues that actually work (with bestselling examples you’ve probably read and loved) and how to know which one, if any, your book actually needs.

[08:40] Why Brandon Sanderson’s prologue in The Way of Kings is a masterclass in hooking readers and setting the stage for an epic story

[11:45] The three key ingredients every strong prologue requires if you want readers to become immersed from the first page and keep turning the pages.

[14:50] Actionable tips to help you create intrigue, build tension, and leave readers desperate to turn the page into Chapter One.

By the end of this episode, you won't be stuck second-guessing your beginning anymore. You'll know whether your novel needs a prologue or if Chapter One is the stronger start (and you’ll understand why). That way, instead of circling back to rework your first pages again and again, you can move forward with confidence, knowing your story is starting exactly where it’s meant to.

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Take the Author Success Blueprint Quiz to get personalized next steps for your writing, editing, and publishing journey
• Grab my free Novel Writing Roadmap, a simple, step-by-step plan to help you trust your story, remove the guesswork, and actually finish your first draft.

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Learn how to write authentic, diverse characters without over-explaining or fearing criticism.

Writing diverse characters can feel intimidating. You want to include different voices in your story, but worry about misrepresenting them. This leads many writers to either avoid diversity altogether or fall into the trap of over-explaining everything for a mainstream gaze, thereby diluting the power of their story.

In this episode, I sit down with Tiffany Grimes, founder of Burgeon Design and Editorial and an MFA-trained editor who specializes in amplifying marginalized voices. After recognizing areas for growth in her own feedback, Tiffany has spent years helping writers shed performative expectations and write with radical honesty.

Here's what we cover:

[05:40] Tiffany's vulnerable experience writing about a Vietnamese character and learning she wasn't the right person to tell that story.

[10:06] The core framework that separates writing "about" a community versus writing "to" your community from the inside.

[18:48] Why you should give yourself permission to write the stereotype first in early drafts.

[20:24] How Jesinia (a deaf character in the Fourth Wing) shows why trusting your audience creates better representation.

[21:20] The protection question that helps you identify when you're diluting your story for mainstream audiences.

[26:53] Understanding emotional clarity and how readers' experience goes deeper than just character representation.

Whether you're writing characters from your own experience or exploring different perspectives, this conversation offers compassionate guidance for creating authentic, powerful stories that honor both your characters and your readers.

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Tiffany Grimes Website
• Free Workbook: Breaking Mindset Barriers and Setting Intentional Goals

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Five book coaches reveal the editing secrets that turn messy first drafts into ready-to-publish manuscripts.

Finishing a first draft is an incredible milestone, but what comes next can feel overwhelming. If you're staring at your messy pages and wondering how to even begin editing, you're not alone. The good news is that there is a way to move forward without spiraling into revision confusion or self-doubt.

In this episode, I've invited five fiction writing coaches to share their best tips for tackling your messy first draft. These strategies will help you gain clarity, cut through the overwhelm, and make real progress toward a publishing-ready manuscript.

Here's what you'll learn:

[02:05] A clever mindset trick that exposes what's really on your pages and why changing your font is editing gold.

[07:30] Why putting your finished first draft away for a little while is the secret to finding your story's true purpose.

[16:45] How two simple "If Only" statements reveal exactly what's missing from your protagonist's journey and plot structure.

[12:35] The "one element at a time" editing method that stops you from drowning in overwhelming revisions and actually makes progress.

[22:30] Why your climactic scene holds all the revision answers and how to mine it for the characters, skills, and growth your story needs.

Tune in to learn how to edit your messy first draft with confidence, simplicity, and ease so you can finally move closer to the finished book you've been dreaming about.

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Monica Cox’s Website
• Erin Halden’s Website
• Nita Collins’s Website
• Elyse Seal’s Website
• Ayesha Ali’s Website
• Ready to edit your novel? Grab my FREE DIY Editing Roadmap: 10 Steps To Editing Your Novel that’ll help you turn your messy first draft into a publish-ready manuscript without the overwhelm and wasted effort.

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You’ve poured your heart into writing your book, but now you’re staring down the next challenge: how do you actually get it into readers’ hands?

Marketing your book can feel overwhelming, but it doesn't have to be. With the right tools—like AI—you can turn it into a streamlined, even fun, part of your creative process.

In this episode, I’m breaking down five beginner-friendly ways AI can help you market your book and connect with readers, all while keeping your voice authentic and your time focused on writing.

Tune in to learn:

• [03:30] How to use AI to craft an author website that feels personal, professional, and uniquely YOU—even if tech isn’t your thing.
• [05:40] The exact prompts to create a welcome email sequence that turns casual subscribers into loyal fans.
• [08:40] How AI can help you brainstorm and batch-create social media content that connects with readers (without the overwhelm).
• [10:55] A step-by-step process for using AI to write a book description that hooks readers and drives sales.
• [13:00] How to leverage AI to draft personalized podcast pitches that get you booked on shows your readers already love.

Whether you’re just starting to write or gearing up to publish, these AI strategies will help you market your book with ease and confidence. Tune in now and start using AI to connect with readers today!

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Get 5 free AI prompts to simplify your book marketing and connect with readers faster—download now!
• Ep. 106 - 5 Steps to Building Your Author Platform
• Ep. 107 - Email List Building Essentials For Authors

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Want to write a Romantasy that readers obsess over? Here’s how to deliver the tropes, intimacy, and magic readers crave.

Romantasy is everywhere right now, and for good reason—it’s the perfect mix of swoony romance, epic fantasy, and unforgettable characters. But if you’ve ever thought, “How do I even start writing Romantasy?” you’re not alone. With so much hype around the genre, it’s easy to feel overwhelmed by all the tropes, rules, and expectations.

That’s why I sat down with Jenna Moreci, an award-winning and Amazon bestselling author, to break down her best tips from her upcoming book, How to Write Romantasy. Whether you’re plotting your first fantasy romance or trying to figure out how to balance magic and intimacy, this episode is packed with actionable advice to help you avoid the most common mistakes, create power couples readers can't stop rooting for, and write the Romantasy you’ve been dreaming of.

Here’s what we talk about:

[07:31] How to approach popular tropes like ‘shadow daddies’ in a way that feels unique to your story, rather than copying and pasting.

[11:42] The 3-part chemistry framework that helps your characters belong together and saves you from endless rewrites.

[17:00] Why emotional intimacy is the real secret weapon in Romantasy, plus the five types of scenes you can’t skip.

[22:25] Smut, spice, or sweet? The surprising truth about writing intimate scenes and why they don’t have to be “super steamy” to hook readers.

[32:28] Why writing Romantasy should be fun and the mindset shift that makes the whole process more enjoyable.

If you've been wondering how to write Romantasy or you're plotting your first fantasy romance, this episode is your ultimate guide to balancing fantasy, romance, reader expectations, and earning those five-star reviews.

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🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Pre-Order How to Write Romantasy
• Get a FREE Digital Workbook With Proof of Preorder Here
• YouTube: Writing With Jenna Moreci
• Ep. 182- Writing Romantasy: How to Balance Fantasy Elements and Romance in Your Novel

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Discover the five essential strategies for mastering multiple-POV novels without confusing your readers.

Have you ever wondered if you could write a multi-POV story like The Girl on the Train? Or how about The Six of Crows?

The kind that pulls you into multiple characters' worlds so completely that you feel like you know each one personally?

Writing a multiple-POV novel can create incredible depth and complexity when done correctly. But it can also turn your story into a confusing mess if you don't know the essential multi-POV techniques.

Whether you're considering writing your first multiple POV story or you're curious about what makes some multi-perspective novels so captivating (while others fall flat), this episode will spill it all.

Tune in to discover:

[02:50] The truth about how many POV characters your story actually needs.

[04:35] The easiest way to make each character's voice so different that readers never get confused about who's speaking.

[06:40] Why 'head-hopping' is the fastest way to lose readers, and the simple rule that prevents it every time.

[08:00] The one question that reveals whether showing the same scene twice will captivate readers or kill your pacing.

[09:00] The secret to balancing page time so that readers stay equally invested in every character's journey.

Whether you're trying to decide if multiple POVs are right for your story or you're already knee-deep in a multi-POV manuscript and feeling overwhelmed, this episode will give you everything you need to approach it with confidence.

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🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Ep. #90 - How to Choose the Best POV For Your Novel
• Ep. #196 - The Pros and Cons of Writing A Novel With Multiple Points of View

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Discover the counterintuitive first draft editing approach that transforms messy manuscripts into page-turning novels readers love.

Most fiction writers struggle with novel revision because they jump straight into editing their manuscript after finishing their first draft. This approach leads to endless rewrites, overwhelming confusion, and stories that get stuck in endless Chapter 1 revisions, never reaching completion.

Developmental editor Alice Sudlow joins me to share her systematic approach to story editing, which helps writers overcome these revision challenges.

Her revision framework eliminates the guesswork from the editing process, so writers avoid common mistakes that can keep manuscripts stuck in development.

Here's what we cover:

[08:11] Why taking a 4-week break after finishing your first draft gives your mind the mental shift needed for effective manuscript revision.

[10:26] How to create an outline of your completed draft without making changes, yet (the crucial step that reveals your story's true structure.)

[14:38] The fundamental questions that uncover the hidden keys in your story and transform good ideas into compelling narratives that readers can't put down.

[17:46] Why developmental editing is where the real magic happens in fiction writing and how to fall in love with the revision process.

[38:01] How to escape the endless rewriting cycle that traps writers in Chapter 1 forever and finally complete your novel revisions.

Whether you're a first-time novelist struggling with how to edit your manuscript or an experienced writer looking for a better revision strategy, this episode provides the framework you need to turn your draft into a story that agents and readers will love.

Tune in now.

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🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Grab Alice’s FREE Roadmap to a Revision That Actually Works
• Your Next Draft Podcast (Hosted by Alice Sudlow)
• Alice Sudlow’s Website

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Real writers share how they broke free from endless rewrites and abandoned drafts to finally finish their novels in just 90 days—using the exact framework that can unlock your story too.

In this episode, I’m sharing real, inspiring stories from fiction writers who went from stuck and overwhelmed to finishing their novels using the exact framework I teach in Notes to Novel.

You’ll hear from fantasy writers, contemporary fiction authors, and more—writers who were trapped in endless rewrites, drowning in revision loops, or paralyzed by perfectionism. They all discovered that finishing a novel isn’t about working harder—it’s about having the right process.

Here’s what you’ll learn from their breakthroughs:

• [02:25] How Jennifer broke free from a 3-year struggle with the same manuscript by treating her outline as a flexible “map” instead of a rigid plan.
• [06:30] Why Nefer finally escaped a 5-year line editing loop by focusing on story structure before prose—and how this one shift transformed her writing process.
• [10:25] How Tiara went from writing 2,000-word short stories to completing an 80,000-word novel without feeling overwhelmed—by breaking it into manageable scenes.
• [14:00] The moment Jen realized she didn’t need an MFA to write fiction—just a clear strategy—and finished her first draft in 90 days after spending 2 years stuck on 10 pages.
• [16:55] How Sheila used genre frameworks to outline a 4-book series AND a standalone novel after spinning her wheels despite reading every craft book out there.

Whether you’re stuck rewriting Chapter 1, have abandoned manuscripts piling up, or feel paralyzed by novel structure, these writers prove that finishing your book is possible—even with a busy life and no formal creative writing training.

Ready to make your own breakthrough? Enrollment for Notes to Novel closes on August 28th, and we won’t open again until next year. Head to savannahgilbo.com/notes-to-novel to learn more and join the program that’s helped over 800 writers make real progress on their books.

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Learn more about Notes to Novel
• Jennifer Landers on Instagram
• Nefer Doane’s website and Instagram
• Tiara Ito’s website and Instagram
• Sheila Holmes on Instagram

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